ok so you need to finish this story
common its great
and a bit more of what happened last night could be good
or more ROMANCE in both sides you know...

this was pretty good ,
i liked this so far .
keep writing !
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she has no idea how right her friends are... love ya, tanya!

poor Laith... now you need to finish chapter 4, so you can post and i can read... well read more. you know where to send it if you need it to be beta-ed

i love this story!!
ah you left such an evil cliffie.
do update soon! i beg of you.
haha
just a question- where are the bruises from?

hehehe, now remember the ideas we, as in sammy and i, gave you!

Haha- i like this story.
i cannot wait to read the next
chapter. do put it up soon!

Uh-oh. Stephenie Meyer inspired?

It was a good prologue, though. I really enjoyed it and I'm looking forward to more.

- Koki