This is one of the saddest stories I've read on Fictionpress. I feel so sorry for that poor little girl. Thinking about the horror of a bodiless existence and not being able to see those you love is almost more than I can bear. Your story is brilliant and I can't wait for Tessa to find the light.

Sad but an interesting story just the same. Thanks for the kind review. Keep up the awesome work. God Bless.

Aw... i feel horrible for Tessa, trying to spare her parents from dying in the flames. I really like this, you should continue this story! (and SOON!) Lol.

Thanks,

Ink