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Freak Of Music 2009-10-20 . chapter 11
Wow i truly have no words!
x34 2009-02-14 . chapter 11
hey i read this and i really like it.actually i'm also like read and write.but im nt good @ write..im university student and this is my 3rd year i have another year to complete after that i'm going 2 write book first.if u want to contact me
Wounded Warrior 2008-12-25 . chapter 11
Nice story. =] I liked it a lot.
Deeps 2008-09-02 . chapter 11
WOW! this is averfy good ending and will there be another story of Brooke and Michael
licette230 2008-09-02 . chapter 11
I can't believe it's finally over!
I'm so sad :(
At least I have your other stories an so do the other readers
so plz update the other ones soon
cuz this is killing me
I swear it is
I can feel it xD
Lady R 2008-09-02 . chapter 11
Aww, soo adorable! Again, such a great story!! It indeed answered all my questions. Great job!
LovexLostxPleasexReturn 2008-09-01 . chapter 11
I love this story. Very easy to read and well written at the same time. The ending was adorable with little Alyson and I'm happy Brooke got her happy ending too!
writer209 2008-08-31 . chapter 11
*sigh* i loved it. I really like how you finished up Brooke's story too and I'm so glad she didn't stay with that ** haha. But good job again! I'll have to check out some more of your stories :)
crashendingx 2008-08-28 . chapter 10
So cute!
Deeps 2008-08-28 . chapter 10
yes i think epilogue is needed and if u r planning for it then post it soon.
Lady R 2008-08-28 . chapter 10
I was right!! He didn't show up! Yeah, me! LOL

This was good, and I don't think it necessarily needs an epilogue, but it would be nice to see what happens to Brooke and Jack (did they get married?), was Cody still at his bachelor party, drunk and with that stripper?

The main thing is that Lucy and Ryan are together forever. *giggles*

I'm also glad you didn't drag this out 20 some chapters. This was short and sweet. Love it!
righthere431 2008-08-28 . chapter 1
tsk tsk, i hope brooke and jack break it off
XstarXseerX 2008-08-28 . chapter 10
I want an epilouge!
KelseyBell910 2008-08-28 . chapter 10
really great! please do an epilogue!
writer209 2008-08-28 . chapter 10
*tear* that was amazing :D

i vote yes on the epilogue
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