The first part of this poem reminds me so much of a holiday i took with a bunch of friends. We were drinking a bit and when i drink i get depressed, so i just sort of hid myself in a corner away from everything, hoping someone would ask what was wrong... no one did :(

There is a definate feeling of saddness and emptiness in this poem. Kind of like the feeling of having a hole in your heart that you just want to have filled. But I think the poem may be missing a bit of depth...Like, the feeling is there but you could enforce it a little more strongly in your readers if you added a little something. Maybe like adding some more description on exactly what you're feeling.

Really good job, though. I liked the poem! _

actually, it did bring out emotions.

i mean, your poem made me feel a little sad and thrown away.

it's pretty good.

I suppose I was a bit confused, perhaps because it's so vague when concerning the subject. Obviously something has happened, but it seems like some sort of suicide in the ending. There was a bit too much repetition for my taste, but that's just my personal pet-peeve. It definitely gave off emotion, loneliness and anger and confusion. Good job overall.