This was a really sweet chapter. but there was only one problem. The last sentence.

'Then, before I could fully comprehend what was happening, Caleb moved closer and closer before placing a hand on my cheek and softly and slowly kissing me under the starry night.'

it should be 'And softly and slowly KISSED me under the starry night' not 'kissing'

other than that it was a sweet heart warming chapter. really loved it.

:D... it's just so bloody amazing, i really can't wait till you update, i can't even describe how amazing you are and what an awesome writer you are. :)

; ;righ! FINALLLLLLLLLLY! YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYA YAYAYAY!

there so sweet together . it was worth the wait. cant wait for more im so hooked on this story.

yeeeeeeees! thank you :).

(I'm just going to make up words here) That was the awesomest, bestest and cutest chapter so far :)

OMG yay! That was definitely worth the wait! Ahhhhhhh I'm so happy they FINALLY kiss! Gosh, so perfect. I love the way you wrote it. A big build up and then the sweet innocent kiss at the end. Love it!
Keep up the awesome work! :D xx

oh my gosh, i love it! They fianlly kiissssseeedddd :))))))) it was worth the wait... just please don't make us wait that long again lol. oh my gosh, i started squealing when i saw that you updated my sister looked at me like 'what the...' soon!

When my friend and I read the ending part when they kissed we actually screamed out loud and I started jumping up and down XD FINALLY they kiss and it was perfect 3 amazing job and update asap (:

Great Chapter! This should be published soon! And update as soon as possible, I cant wait till the next update!

Yaay! I'm so glad that you updated. Now that I actually have time to read, everyone seems to be posting less frequently. Just my luck I guess, haha. I love your style of writing, the emotion, characters, just everything. You really make me lose myself in the story and when I am done reading I need a second to get back to reality. Also, HE FINALLY KISSED HER! YAY :D

It was awesome! I feel like I'm in love with Jayden. Was that the last chapter? Please tell me no!

FINALLY! Thank u thank u thank u! I promised myself that i would scream as soon as u updated and if i was in school when u updated then i would get up and do a little dance in front of everybody (One footed because I'm on crutches) thankfully i was at home and so i scream. It took me a while to review because i had to read the last part over and over again! ur the amazing one! Thank u Thank u Thank u again!

Oh my gosh, finally! The moment we've been waiting for... lol

Update! You should publish this someday it's awesome!