I really like this story. I'm so glad that Rose is finally doing something about Callum. I think one of the reasons I like this so much is cause I have three little boys, the oldest is named Jaden and the Youngest is Caleb... and a younger nefew named Nate... so I kinda pictre older versons of them when I read the names...

Caleb is not "too perfect"! please don't change him, i love him just like he is! also, awesome chapter, update soon!

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

Nice story :)

This chapter was FANTASTIC! One of your best :) I really liked what happened and I can't wait for the next chapter!

i saw it coming, the abuse, but not the rape. i know people personally who have been raped and you described it perfect i love and pleaze hurry with the next chapter i am literally waiting by my new christmas laptop for the next one. thank you for your wonderful story and MERRY CHRISTMAS!

Thank. God.
Sweet Jesus I started reading this and I was all like, oh, what a cute story! Sounds great, lets read till one in the morning. And then I read the beginning of Callum being such a controlling ass, and I was like, "FUCK NO. I AM NOT GOING TO PUT UP WITH A WEAK WILLED PERSON." and then I realized I would do the same and blah blah blah. Anywho, I finally got through your amazing story, and if Caleb beats Callum's ass, I will feel like everything has been set right. And, any guy who asks you out after two days is for sure using you. ASDFGHJKL
Great story. Just shoot Collum in the forehead for me. xD

Milady, just when i thought you couldn't make me hate any of your characters anymore, you did T_T I established that i hate rose and callum ages ago, and now i hate them even MORE. And i hate caleb, and sam and seth. I pretty much hate all of your characters :P And you should actually take that as a compliment, because you have managed to portray them so well and so realistically, that i can actually feel hatred towards them, well mostly their actions and their behaviour! despite you thinking this chp. was cliche, i actually didn't see it coming. Rose is a complete idiot, but at least im glad shes calling caleb at the end. And callums a psychopath that should be put in a mental asylum. Please please make that happen at the end of the story, i beg u! oh and update soon, pretty please with a cherry on top :)

I was expecting Caleb to give up on her! And I was happy that he did, because it maybe gave her the push she needed to think about dumping Callum.

Who, again, is an ass.

Loved this chapter!

when rose breaks up with callum, try having caleb somehow be there, whether rose tells him to or not, then make callum hit rose to try to scare her into staying with him

Such a great Christmas present! Please update soon!

Thank you! She finally comes to her scences! It didn't happen the way I wanted it to. I'm just happy that it's all over.
It is all over right?

Well i definitely aaw some similar to this coming, where Callum would abuse Rose to the point where she does something about it. The fight between rose and caleb is quitr emotional for caleb i think... I mean, who wouldnt get mad if they were in his position? As for the entire chapter, i honesly would have to say that it may not be as awesome as your other chapters but its still very good and that cliffy may be cliché and predictable but perfect. Keep it up, cant wait for the next chapter... Merry Christmas! :D xx

Yep saw it coming! But I think I'm just getting a feel for the story.
A grim of a Chapter but well written.
Can't wait for the next chapter

S x

Cos its my birthday tomoz can you update soon please.. If not then dont worry and god i hate callum! I know someone just like him and he scares the shit out of me he even nearly broke my wrist :( but so good its unreal!