CONTINUEEEEE

I am so glad to have stumbled across this story. In the beginning, I wasn't sure who I liked more Callum or Caleb. The guys both equally seemed amazing. But you soon provided certain clues and hints to reveal a little more about each one of them. I am so so so mad about Callum. I think all your readers might be too because of what a jerk he is. I hate how he treats her. I hate how he verbally, physically, and emotionally abusive. He does not know how to treat his significant other at all . . . sure he has a terrible family life . . . but still! She has been through so much . . . and in the next chapter, you may even let us know what happened. I really like Caleb . . . he is such a sweetheart. At first, I wasn't sure about him because he had a girlfriend. But he turned out to be such a good guy. He really does care about his family and friends. I think Rosie really needs Caleb in her life with all the difficulties that has occurred in her life, such as her past and even stupid Callum. Caleb shows Rosie how people treat and spoil their significant others rather than change them. I really like seeing Rosie and Seth's relationship. I want to know what happened in their past to explain their ways in the present moment. So far I find this story very interesting. I can't wait until you update this story again, since you left us at a cliffhanger of a confession. XD

Dun dun dunnn indeed! Big cliffie over here! Haha. Wow, this chapter holds a lot of bits and pieces to a big puzzle and the fun is just getting started! Hehe, i sound weird. But yeah, the 'fight' between Caleb and Rose has cease-fired so all good in that department and i have a feeling it gets a bit better with her confession of the death of her parents. Callum is one big villain, in a British, good looking guy.. I'd love to see the day (or chapter) that he gets told. Anyways, awesome chapter as always! Keep it up, cant wait for the next! :D xx

Admittedly, this chapter was much more interesting than the previous two (though I do understand that you needed to bring out Callum's vices and Caleb's softer spots for the story). Then again, I find myself so much more interested when Seth and the other brothers come into the picture. Somehow, they seem to bring out more colors to the story.

I like Jayden and Nate. They have very carefree kinds of character. As for Callum's possessive nature, I suppose it's going to get worse and hateful.

Anyway, I find myself getting really curious about what Rose actually did to cause her parents' death...

Till then, take care!

- softwinds -

love the chapter, i and i don't like her BOYFRIEND! HE AN ASSHOLE! love the chapter, pelase update asap

Omg i love it update soon, i cant wait to read more, ill be happily waiting:)

Alrite... U kind of told me to review So.. I am and I want to say I LOVE this story and its a MIRACLE that u gt lyk 300 views ALREADY! Lucky youuu. Lol... Um ... Yh I think it wud be betta if callum wasn't the verbally abusive type but yh other than that I LOVE this story all the best love from
Itsjustmex

wertyuiop, please3 update soon!

Love the chapter,i can't wait for the next update

I know pretty obvious but im think that Callum is the bad guy in this story.. And i really really wanna see (read) him gettong humiliated or something embarrassing, but that will come, eventually. And without a great villain, theres no great hero, or in this case, Caleb ;) this story is just starting to get juicier, cant wait for the rest! :D xx
btw, thnx for clearing the who 'not owning' thing with me. Im glad that you nothing major happened to your house, poor pool and gazebo, though.

Omg! Callums a bitch! And Rosie is being a total bully to poor Caleb! So cruel! Y is she an idiot, can't she just dump the retard! Yyyyyyyy, u better update soon...or else
:P

Well, I liked Callum in the beginning, now not so much. But I do like how you show not everyone is what they seem, even sexy British boys with motorcycles. And, I don't know if this is what you were going for, but I think this also shows what happens when girls are sheltered all their lives, they don't know how to deal with controlling guys. A great story, and keep writing!

this is like one of my favorite fics on here! update asap yes(; (; (; . callum became such a dick. i just want to see her and caleb together :(
why is she doing what callum asks her too. she's being so weak ahh!
when i saw an email alert about your fic, i was like omgomg :D hehe

Callum has brainwashed Rose! Ahhh! He's gotten her into believing what he is doing is perfectly okay, when really, Caleb is the one who is thinking straight. Oh Rose, figure it out already!

ugh callum just annoys me more and more. i mean caleb plays the guitar... what more could you ask for... ;) team caleb!