Nice imagery!

Ooh. Its rather creepy but beautiful to. It says a lot in only three lines.

Ew cool! This poem is a bit eerie! I loved how you used the word "arise"! Nice!

I've never been a haiku person, but this one was really good. Well done. Keep writing.

Thank you for pointing me towards this haiku! I see what you meant when you said that ending each line with a similar type of word makes the whole thing flow better.

Haiku's are nowhere near my strong point. Thanks for the help.

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Really liked this one. Nice work, keep it up.

-DV-

Very pretty. I like this.

Cool! Beautifully written. Thanks for the kind suggestions on my new poem and for adding me on your profile page. I made some changes to the poem as well. I hope it sounds better. Write on and God bless.

I liked this one. i could picture the night you're describing, and it's not easy to write something like that when you've only got seventeen syllables to work with. Very good work

I love nature haikus! Well done. I like how the haiku expresses night as the awakening of a different world. When most of us would be falling asleep in our beds, a different world is just waking up.

Interesting. The last line seems to contrast with the first two, feeling much more ominous. Good job.