|Reviews for The Night|
| Angelic Hellraiser 8/28/08 . chapter 1
| Looking for Bliss 8/28/08 . chapter 1
Ooh. Its rather creepy but beautiful to. It says a lot in only three lines.
| Awesome Albino 8/21/08 . chapter 1
Ew cool! This poem is a bit eerie! I loved how you used the word "arise"! Nice!
| May Elizabeth 8/14/08 . chapter 1
I've never been a haiku person, but this one was really good. Well done. Keep writing.
| deletekthxbai 8/8/08 . chapter 1
Thank you for pointing me towards this haiku! I see what you meant when you said that ending each line with a similar type of word makes the whole thing flow better.
Haiku's are nowhere near my strong point. Thanks for the help.
| Decoris Verbum 8/8/08 . chapter 1
Really liked this one. Nice work, keep it up.
| papermask 8/7/08 . chapter 1
Very pretty. I like this.
| Needa S 8/7/08 . chapter 1
Cool! Beautifully written. Thanks for the kind suggestions on my new poem and for adding me on your profile page. I made some changes to the poem as well. I hope it sounds better. Write on and God bless.
| ShockingReality 8/7/08 . chapter 1
I liked this one. i could picture the night you're describing, and it's not easy to write something like that when you've only got seventeen syllables to work with. Very good work
| Gem Kitty 8/7/08 . chapter 1
I love nature haikus! Well done. I like how the haiku expresses night as the awakening of a different world. When most of us would be falling asleep in our beds, a different world is just waking up.
| Ashelin 8/7/08 . chapter 1
Interesting. The last line seems to contrast with the first two, feeling much more ominous. Good job.