This is chapter six... I think you meant to post a different chapter here...
In other news, I really like the story. It does seem to move a little fast, but I guess it is plausible. It's very different, but I like it.

Okay wow. This is one of the most random stories I have ever read on this place...no wait a minute, ever. It is so cool! I just want to know though: where are that Kaiden and Xeno going to come back into the story?

This story looks interesting! (Such ashame i don't have much more time to spare right now... otherwise i would read more chapters) Go girl power! Woot woot! lol. Anyways, write more! (and SOON)

this is a GREAT book but i dint get the whole where it wasin the olden days then it switched to modern times i was like WUH but this is awesome u would think bcuz of the childish ness it would make u turn away but actually ti makes you love it even more =]