As far as story structure and accuracy go it's nearly flawless, an obvious indicator that you poured a lot of effort into making it as good as possible.

Content wise... *whistles* Characters were portrayed exceptionally well, especially when considering how much of their personality you were able to display in such a short story. That's something that's incredibly hard to do and you managed to pull it off nicely.

Bonus points for avoiding the typical "one side is evil" theme that a LOT of war stories seem to feature!

Excellent job!