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nonaccount 2009-07-16 . chapter 4
I love this! The narrator's internal monologue is so amusing, "I'm going to be the top Top! The only danger now is my need to do a skippy happy walk..." I only wish there was more.

Is Daisuke's meanie crush a wolf too? Someone who might end up being a mate to Jason?
Midnights Scream 2009-06-27 . chapter 4
this story is a whee bit strange, but I like it. He's a very interesting guy and he seems to like Daisuke, but I think there's someone better out there. great job and hope you update soon!
cracksinthepavement 2009-05-04 . chapter 4
Dude, he is so not a top. I'm hoping for a big bad alpha wolf to sweep him off his feet? Or a guy who's flexible?

Either way, I'm digging this story. Such a sweet concept.
StoicCrying 2009-04-02 . chapter 4
Ha! I absolutely adore him! And Dai is so cuttee!

update sooN!
Poptart Guava Kid 2009-04-02 . chapter 4
lol. skippy happy walk...but yay! update! joy! back to his place? fast. i hope he doesnt get pregnant...
...:P
Poptart Guava Kid 2009-03-25 . chapter 3
this is an...odd...story. i like it so far! do you plan on continuing it?
Lou Harper 2008-12-14 . chapter 3
This is really cute in a weird way. Sometimes you make little grammar errors but they're easy to overlook with all the humor... and Jason's thoughts are completely hilarious ^_^
Lerene 2008-12-11 . chapter 3
wow does he have an interesting family
DiamondKing 2008-12-06 . chapter 3
This story makes me laugh. A lot. I can't get enough of it! I'm curious to see what will happen next.
Scarlet Hyacinth 2008-11-23 . chapter 2
Finally remembered reading this, sweet. Call it payback :P. I laughed my ass off at "Sonia and Lex fell in love at first sniff." A big thumbs up for the funny element! And Lex is so kawaii, too bad he's straight :P.
I know u'r busy, but please write more soon, mkay? Can't wait to meet Jason's uke. Lots of love, Scarlet
Lerene 2008-11-21 . chapter 2
"May she get flees." LOL, I loved that line. Please continue this soon. I'm very curious about it.
Lerene 2008-11-21 . chapter 1
Wow is greg stupid
StoicCrying 2008-11-17 . chapter 2
Sweet. So now he needs to be a seme, and find a uke! xD

update sooN!
StoicCrying 2008-10-08 . chapter 1
wait is this like Jacob from um...crap...I think...her name is Scarlet Hyacinth?

Like the M%MY one?

or something totally different?
Roman Candles 2008-08-08 . chapter 1
Great chapter and great story so far. I love the idea and the way you put their inner thoughts into words. Please update soon, because I can't wait for the next chapter.
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