Dreams never die... Unless you forget them them you're pretty much screwed...

Sorry. I was just thinking out loud. Which is good. Your haiku made me think. I thought it was lovely. Simple but very nice. I wish I was better with haikus, but I can never find the right words to match up to the 5-7-5 syllable rule. Another reason I admire this one. I also actually really like the last line "But dreams never die". I made my day... well night since it's already 11:42, but either way after another crappy day I smiled. Thanks.

I like it! Haikus have always been really interesting to me. So simple, but the good ones have great meaning.

Very well done!

somehow there is a pervading sense of bravery and i like it very much! haikus are so much fun to read and you did a really good job with this one

I like this very much! Awesome job LOL!

true, but at times it seems as though they do die

Aww! That is so true! Dreams will never die. They might change, but that's as far as it goes.
I think that if you decided to lengthen this one and go into more detail, maybe give a few examples, and stuff like that, this could be a winner.
Keep up the osome work!

I love the power of haiku - so simple and to the point! I don't write haiku myself, but aren't there supposed to be seven syllables in the second line? Also you might not need the comma after "But." Great work though overall, and keep experimenting with different poetic styles. It shows real guts to branch out from just free verse.