wow Delilah =D haha thats funny. but seriously you write like a pro. i mean after 30 seconds i didnt see the words it was like a movie wow you should seriously go to a publisher.

Wow.

Poignant, touching, very heartbreaking.

I'm still crying. Life has a funny way of going about things sometimes. And I still can't figure out if it's for better or worse.

I'm in tears right now, and that's a hard thing to get me to do. So sad. So beautiful.

OH MY GOSH.
This made me cry so bad >

omg, seriously, that just gave me goosebumps
i loved how you wrote it, & it was just so amazing
there is one mistake in chapter one though
instead of choking, you put chocking
just letting you know :]
keep up the awesome work
x

Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. I applaud you for writing something so exquisite.

Oh my darling little cousin wrote such a heartwrenching story! Your story reminded me of an author who wrote Young Adult stories about people with chronic and terminal illnesses; Lurlene McDaniel. Her stories were always sad, but heartfelt, just like yours! Maybe you've heard of her? If not, I had a book of hers, but I'm not sure if I have it or if someone borrowed it. But you should definitely check her books out.

You know, at some point while reading the story, I forgot that it was written by you--but in a good way! It read maturely and I'm proud that you're growing as a writer. Ah you're growing up. Oh the misery of waning childhood. But oh the joys of entering teenhood.

You did a good job!! Yay! Love you!

=D I agree with the two reviews below me completely and honestly.

Oh my god. That was really good. it was so sad! I'm gonna go cry and be all depressed now. haha just kidding but really good job. You are very talented.

Good job, you made me cry. I literally had to stop at the end to wipe my eyes so I could see. Seriously, this was very well written. I know it's not real but I want her alive, just for a little longer at least. Haha. Not sure exactly how you'd continue this but I'd LOVE it if you did. Anyways, I'm babbling. Great job.