that's sad! but i loved it! write on!

beautiful poem! ~Anne please check out my work :)

I really like your imagery here it's pretty and different, which is hard to do with the ocean since it's been written about so much. So goo job! Some of the phrasing seemed a bit off like the third to last line and "troubles wash away" at least to me anyway, but it's still a really great piece!

beautiful, babe, as always. :] miss you!