|Reviews for What I Don't Like|
| eighteen hundred 8/8/08 . chapter 1
I like what seems to be the accidental snatches of rhyme, rhyme that doesn't establish a melody so to speak, but made me look for one. The vaguely off-kilter tone gives an interesting flow to lines that are amusing in almost mean or flippant sort of way. "I want to know it all/And have fun telling you;" "I want to live forever but.../I won't remember wanting to." There's a perhaps unintentionally or unconsciously nasty tone to the whole thing, which makes the title interesting.
I like it.