Someone shares my love of horror.
And heavy metal.
And where have you been all my life?
Sounds pretty cool. :D
Hope to read more of your work soon.

- s c a r f a c e sam

Hey there! Interesting song, I gotta say this is probably one I wouldn't identify with your usual type of style. And I can see why you would catagorize it as Horror now, before hand I couldn't quite place how a song could be done so.

Good explanation about at the beginning of how exclamation marks and ellipses should be interpreted. I was kinda wondering if a single one was meant to be screamed and whatnot.

My favourite part was: "And I!! Would have held you forever! You fill the abyss of my soul! And the nothings on my mind!!"

Something else I would like to comment on is about how it can be read like a poem as well (imagine eh? Songs and poetry are basically one in the same, just one has music to it), and that's the kind of feel I got out of it. Mostly because I wouldn't know what the sound would be like at all; not a single guess.

Anyway, good job. I don't recall any mistakes.