This has an interesting progression and texture to it. I like how the time shifts also usher in changes of perspective. The specific imagery in the third to last stanza that starts, "a few evenings ago", really shines for the reader. It's a good transition stanza from some of the abstractual concepts in earlier stanzas. Very well written. MD:77.

I really like your writing style and the images I got from this poem, great job.

I know that feeling allright.

Good poem, I liked the line "the movies got that right" a lot. heh. :)

haha shit. i love it.