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Ticia 2009-12-03 . chapter 1
This was really enjoyable. I loved it! I was having a bad day but now I feel so much better. Thanks!
Bangle Meister 2009-12-01 . chapter 1
That was SO CUTE! The whole stalking thing should have freaked me out, but I thought it was sweet. And the ending was great :P

I loved it.
DragonxFox 2009-11-28 . chapter 1
That was so cute, lol.
I love how you wrote it. It was interesting being in her head, and all the things she came up with...it was great.
Lol, good job =]
Juliet 2009-11-28 . chapter 1
Hi, Vena Cava. I'm Juliet...and you probably don't know who I am, considering my website is fairly new and very unpopular. Anyway, whenever someone suggests a story for my strictly romance site, it goes up on the list. You're the first and only so far.
No one suggested this one...I actually chose it since it's one of my personal faves. And when one's story makes my site, it gets a review.
Well, as for the review:
I really love this. It's so cute...and funny...and the ending is, like, the best in ending history. This is the most amazing one-shot I have ever read. The voice is so clear and prominent; it just carries the story.

Awesome job.

-Juliet
Auphora 2009-11-27 . chapter 1
Ah, it's late and I'm trying very had not to laugh too hard but it's difficult with few lines being what they are. Hilarious!

Needless to say, this oneshot made me smile. You did a great job writing this. :)

Wishing you the best,
-Auphora
Robyn Night 2009-11-22 . chapter 1
ha ha ha ha, this story made me laugh!! :) It was so well written! I love the way that you decided to end it!! I had to actually go back and read it again before I finally got it!! She was his "date" right!?! And he knew that she was following him (at least part of the time)!?! Ahhahahaha! That is SO cool!! :) :)
Faeries of Destruction 2009-11-22 . chapter 1
Curiousity: 1
Cat: 0
You? Dead.

Caught red-handed! haha! That is absolutely hilarious.

Caught stalking... permit me an extrememly-out-of-character girlish giggle: teehee!

Wicked, awesome, fanchasmic.

I love it.

~Faeries
cally422 2009-11-21 . chapter 1
Great oneshot !
I think you should REALLY write an ending!
OnigiRimi 2009-11-18 . chapter 1
This is hilarious! And so cute! I can totally relate to '007' in every way xD

You did a really great job writing this, I honestly didn't find anything wrong with it.

The hanging ending made me all 'ARGHKJDSFLKJXC!' but that's a good thing, because that means I really loved it and wanted it to continue ;D It's a nice hanging ending though!

Thanks writing this, I loved it! :)
Blue Devil012 2009-11-18 . chapter 1
Wow, at first I was really unbelieving as to why a one shot had so many freakin reviews, but after I read your one shot I can now see why. Very creative, kept me reading and laughing^^ Thank you! :D
daveyhavokobsessed 2009-11-18 . chapter 1
deep...indeed :p
Jaliy 2009-11-17 . chapter 1
Nice story!
Jaliy!~
jyss101 2009-11-15 . chapter 1
funny :)
Seekah 2009-11-14 . chapter 1
Oh duh...eczema...the heat rash kind of disease right? that stuff is awful. anyhow, thats still odd but once again, great story. Guess she wasn't as stealthy as she though haha
Seekah 2009-11-14 . chapter 1
holy crap! Ah! You ended it there? What? WHAT? Grr...now i understand why this has so many reviews. its undeniably funny and the whole 007 status thing was so witty and dorky and just...I dunno. I loved it...so the summary was false advertising then? lol. well, technically no, it was better than the summary eluded to but he wasn't masturbating then. darn. Never heard of that disease though...thats kind of weird...anywho, i enjoyed it and im gonna search ur profile to see if theres maybe a sequel or more great stories. thanks for this
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