 Rei 2008-09-15 . chapter 1 This story is so addicting. You should write more stories like this one--I love those childhood friends turned to lovers. Poor Dawson--but props for Nathan. |
 the-griever 2008-09-15 . chapter 1Oh. That's was really sad. Nice story though.
Cheerz! |
 Yasona Black 2008-08-27 . chapter 1Wow. That was a brilliant one-shot. I loved how everything was introduced to the story, and how you had no idea what exactly was happening until the end.
Only one bit of concrit: "'Nathan!' she heard herself call out subconsciously." This feels a little passive and the sentence is a bit too long for the hurried feel that's going on in that particular part.
Anyways, I loved it. It was definitely well-written and I enjoyed it thoroughly. |
 Some one 2008-08-21 . chapter 1 This one-shot was awsome! It was so sweet. I found this through the link you put on gaia.
You have an awsome vocabulary! Though I did see two mistakes. other than that it was really good! |
 Lian Bynum 2008-08-15 . chapter 1Aw...that was really cute. I didn't expect it to turn out how it did! |
 QuantumGlow 2008-08-12 . chapter 1Beautifully written, I love it! |
 Koki Enwai 2008-08-10 . chapter 1Aw. Such a sweet ending. Thank goodness Nathan was there for her.
Nice work!
- Koki |