Love it lots and lots and lots! So much emotion and you do it so well!

aw. it's cute.

AAww this is so sad, yet so cute :D I love it

That was very touching, very beautiful.
Great work!

0mg that was amazing!!

tragic.
oh-so-tragic.
man, i loved the repetition.
nice touch (:

I really liked this story, goes with tragic things well :)

so sad but i loved it.

That was so beautiful. And extremely sad :(
But what a great poem ^^

It's an interesting romance, dark and sweet at the same time. I haven't read anything like it, to date, and I'm very glad woodstock1969 added this to our c2. (:

aw this was sweet...
but really sad =(

Wow...that was beautiful, and I LOVE it! I like the idea tons, and the way you wrote is was amazing. I am really empathizing with the guy in heaven right now...poor him. Anyway, great job! :)

That was wonderful and sad. Great Job :)!

o.o It's really nice..
I don't mean to sound rude or inconsiderate, but this sounds more like a poem than a story.

aw... that was adorable! i loved it so much. it's on my favs