Beautiful. I agree with the comment about the old English. I was watching a movie recently and in the movie the actors were re-enacting a Shakespeare play. One of the characters exclaimed how beautiful the style of his writing was and how much more meaningful it is. I think the same concept applies to your poem ... your language and style add a whole new dimension to the poem. Nice work. Keep writing & God bless, k.

This piece is beautifully written. I love it! The use of Old English was kind of refreshing in a way. Excellent job!

wow, i really like this.
its written very well.

-Audrey