That was so beautiful!! And sad =[
Bit confusing though XD

aw... damn. ive been doing that a lot. aww-ing at cutethings. anyway, love the story:D

Wow the way you wrote that was almost poetic
But I'm going to agree with the others is this like
forbidden love step siblings or something.
It was incredibly good though and I felt her heartache
Your an amazing writer

wt just happened? is this incest or smthg? the story is wonderful and all, but i sort of not get it. waait,lol is she an angel? 'cause she's praying and all.

can i say owned?

haha, kidding.

it was beautiful.

i dont want to sound mean but wat the hell just happened

Wow. So much passion and feeling, I nearly got tears in my eyes. Wonderful writer.

i don't really get it; it's too deep. but it's sad, it really knock you back to reality and realize that it's not always a happily ever after.

this is such a brilliant piece, very moving.
not gonna lie, i teared up a little at the end lol
i'm so curious about the left out information, but i guess that really just adds to the awesomeness of the story :P
i'm sure i've told you like a million times, but you are such an awesome writer :)

so sad i want to cry right now!

Beautiful. I cried at the end. So sad, but I also wonder whats so abd that they cant be together? Still you did an awsome job.

Add me to the list of people who don't understand why people hate them, why they can't be together and such, but this is very beautiful indeed. I teared up at the end. It's heartbreaking. I love it though. :)
Keep on pwning!

I don't understand why everyone is revolted by them, are they related or some shit?
Did you write it like that on purpose, so I have to make it up for myself?

Not meaning this in a harsh way, btw. *smiles*

But I guess it was more of a focus on forbidden, not-meant-to-be love, right?
and not the small details... Right?

No reply = me assuming so d:
Kaythankzbai.

Goodness, that was pretty powerful.
I can't help but wonder about the background information of this piece, but, then again, I like not knowing. It's kind of neat to think about what could have happened and what might have.
Which, I suppose, would be your entire point.

The heartbreak felt real. You are very eloquent.

This was pretty poetic in that it has a deeper meaning kind of thing, but I didn't really get the premise of the story, like, why everyone hated them- where they like the golden couple before?, why they had to be apart-is this like a modern day romeo and juliet, or at least something along the lines of they want to be together but there's this really big insurmountable thing stopping them? I don't know, I think you wanted it to be more than just a normal breakup situation, and it was sort of conveyed but I think we needed a little more detail to get greater insight into the characters and their motives and feelings. Becides that though, I liked it, you really did show the pain, anguish, confusion and slight hope that she still had invested in the romance between the two of them. I love reading your stories!