Good story. It would have been an interesting read, it had a nightmarish feel to it. I don't think the guy ever gets the girl in your stories, most of the time he doesn't make it out of the story alive. Catch you later.

~SirScott

Wow!! I knew they would all die. Sort of. He was pretty crazy wasn't he. I wish I could have read the rest of the story. I loved it, as always.