I really like this, It flows nicely and can be read differently, nice work :)

that is awesome, it's quick and the last line makes the poem, clever. If I didn't know,.. I'd ask you how old you are for this one. "Quicker to learn, rising faster." DWC

I think I know just a couple of people like this

I liked this a lot. It's short and too the point. Very poignant, which is what one wants in a story. Kudos!

Please R/R some of my stuff, too. Ty in advance.