The rings sound like they're very pretty, and now I'm left to wonder what they're going to try to do with them.

This is good, and cool. Please update soon!!

The story's progressing pretty well, and I'm curious about what is hidden in the restriced areas. You're doing a good job with estalishing a basic backround for any potential action, and I hope something pops up soon.

Now- write more! Because I want to read it!

I'm glad we finally got to meet Jenny! But I'm a little suspicious- who gets up before 6 o'clock?

The story's getting off to a good start, though I'd like it if you introduced a conflict. Granted, I have 2 more chapters to read before I've caught up, but still. That's my opinion. :)

And as a heads-up, you might want to watch your sentences. Some of them are just a hair short of being a run-on.

Sounds interesting! (And I'm glad you told us all about the schools in the beginning, instead of sticking it in the middle of a scene or something.)

loved this chapter! definitely one of my favorite so far. Drystan's brother sounded a lot like him, hahaha. nice job. WRITE MORE. NOW. :D

Looks good I'm not on here much but this is something I would get on to read more of keep up the good work.
CGIB