This is amazing. words cant discribe how awesome this poem is.

The whole basis of this poem makes it interesting from the start. Apathy or Bust...that's actually catchy, believe it or not. And then you proceed to weave a web of words; I did get lost somwehere in the middle, but you pulled it together brilliantly at the end. Worth the length,definitely.

"Apathy or Bust" is rather scary in ints morals and a place or two in its language; but the rhythm flows and it is highly viusal. A splendid read.

awesome! ver, very cool, i love the last three lines, some of my favorite that i have read on this sit, keep it up:)