Oh yeah i believe! lol. i can't wait to read more of this! post more asap please! you should check out my story Forbidden if you get a chance (:

i like it (: very nice job

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I love this story. I like the attitude of Evelyn, and the gentleness of Gideon. Great story so far.

Oh! I'm excited to see where this goes! Love you lots :)

I love it, this chapter was pretty funny!

I like it. It has great potential

Dude, you took like a long time to update. I'd kick your butt...if it wasn't for this chapter that was cool..I knew Gideon liked her.

Anyways, you better update soon...please?

HEY! I haven't ever been thanked. :( I'm jealous.

Anyway, it's coming along. Doesn't seem like there's an actual motive for the plotline. Things are just...happening. Maybe make them happen for a reason?

Oh and while you're at it, add a huge dramatic battle scene of death, destruction, and terror. I like those. ;)

I find myself being irresistably drawn to vampire-human relationship cliche stories now. WHAT HAVE YOU DONE?

Um...couple spelling errors here and there, but hey, everybody makes them.

Still freaking awesome and hilarious, despite the overused vampire-human cliche.

You do have a knack for writing and you really should keep it up.

This is a really good story so far. It's serious...with nice comic relief. There is a bit of grammar that needs touching up, but honestly, who doesn't need to do that! One thing is that your sentences are alittle choppy at times. I would suggest reading your story outloud to help with this? Great job, I loved it! I will definently be looking forward to the next update.

Cliffhanger! Darn you!

By the way, I like it a lot. Keep updating, please!

Lol...my stalker is a vampire! AH! Makes me laugh, so write more asap and update.

Ok, I'm definitely hooked and I wanna see what happens next. So, you better keep your promise and update soon...pretty please?

Btw that Gideon dude sounds hot...just a mere observation.