Sorry, I had to be creative if you can't get PMs. Anyhow...

I thought this was good. The sentences were. A little. Choppy. But on the other hand, the effect of it was good, and added another dimension to the story that I liked.

I'd love to talk, either by PMs (which would be lovely for you to enable) or AIM. If you prefer AIM, which I think is easier, my sn is this penname (but you can't IM me unless I have your sn too).

Surprising and exciting (:
This one is my favorite.