I'd love a night's kip like this, lol. This is a very calming and soothing piece. It reads like ancient wisdom, great work.

fear is safety in preparation

-takes my breath away

it builds and sways, is strong and delicate

talks without speaking

so natural, what it should be

After reading this, I do feel reassured. Last night it felt like the thunder and lightning came from my own backyard and I was scared, which felt silly because I knew I was safe inside. Great job on this, take care.

Excellent concept and execution-very unique. Although the lines are fragmented, somehow they flow-I think the breaks assure that. I love the last three lines.