Quite sweet actually. I like this, which is funny considering my views about marriage. (I personally think it's one of our less sensible institutions, though I'm sure many will disagree.) You have a lovely rhythm and all the rhymes seemed to make sense rather than being forced, which is far from common.
Mind you, the bit about eight children frightened me a little. *One* would probably overload me.
Much love

- Harriet.

Ah, how cute! Love is so romantic before you get into a committed relationship. If you had written this poem after you found Mister-Right, it would be very different.

aw, i love this! I think every girl wants this...at least I know I do! C: