Awesome ending! Love it! :)

Love it :) I am a hundred percent sure that you could use this universe (with all the talents) and post a much longer story :D If you haven't already, I'll go check after this. But either way, I would love to read more of this universe with people having talents.

I loved your story. Its a sweetheart. Keep writing like that and you will find a very big fan of your writing in me.

aw!that was so, like, fluffy! i loved it. (X

Ah! I found it again! This lovely, charming story that made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside... Like I had just eaten a kitten! In a good way.

I love your style of writing. This was written beautifully, and with heart. I couldn't find the tiniest thing wrong with it even if I tried. Well, actually, the steryotypical spoiled little princess irked me to the moon and back, but then, this is a Cinderella story. On that note, I love the whole idea of a small and innocent gift. It's a nice changa from the suddenly superpowered heroines of today.

...What more can I say? Beautiful story. I loved it. Keep writing!

such a sweet ending! i think that it's a bit strange since you mix modern things with the long-ago time period but whatever... :)

I love it, I love it. it's kinda like Cinderella and i've always like Cinderella. :)

I really like this story, i think it's very cute. light-hearted and sweet. :)

This is sickeningly adorable(But a good kind of sickeningly adorable :) ) It's a very original and imaginative spin off of cinderella. I especially like the Talents you gave the characters. Sneezing green polka dots? Priceless XD

i think that this is a very cute and sweet story. it's like a different version of Cinderella and i've always love Cinderella the best. this story made me smile and i just really like it.

Aww that's such a sweet story. I also love how the 'prince' can so plainly see the goodness of someone. Loved it :)

cute! I wish you made the ending a bit longer though really really cute!

This is absolutely magnificently written. A very good rewrite of the classic Cinderella tale. I take my hat off to you. Well done!

...I am in the habit of giving concrit, but I can't think of anything I'm araid. So take that as a compliment!

DSP

I like the idea of talents; very creative! I was in the worst mood, and that cheered me right up. Loved it! :)