|Reviews for Wasted|
| Sit In Solemn Silence 8/12/08 . chapter 1
I loved the third poem! And the metaphors were absolutely mindblowing. The writing was beautiful and I don't have anything to say in critique.
| truefire 8/12/08 . chapter 1
I love it! It's fantastic. My only critisism (hopefully contructive) is that some of the lines are a little short which makes it choppy. I think you might be able to embody more of the "drunkenness" with longer lines.