Wow. Just... Wow. This was a really good fic. I liked it! Keep it up, plz! XP Will there be a follow up to this and/or Snow Vampire? Plz? (Puppy-dog-eyes) Lolz!!
Your reviewer,
Ashton Nightingale

I really like how realistic your story feels. People know this kind of thing happens, but no one ever expects it to happen to them, and that is the exact thing that happened to Sebastian.

The emotions that Sebastian shows are so perfect and well written that it seems almost like a recount. I hate how stories always have the victim go down sobbing and all that, I mean, biologically, the human body would eventually react to ministrations, even if the mind attached did not want to react. You played that up perfectly.

Morbid, yes, but beautifully written and a wonderful story.

poor poor boy

Ah! Awesome.

Yeah.

I feel like I should really, really write so much more, because this is an awesome story, but I just can't think of anything. I'll just say, again, awesome.

Well I will say I enjoyed this work quite a bit. In part becuase on some level I enjoy the idea of a psychological force, turning pleasure into one's shame at having it. I really hope you do more, and I look forward to reading what ever should come.