:) that's really good, i like it - it's descriptive and i can easily imagine it :D no spelling mistakes either :) You're a really good writer

Oh, that was freaking aweseome...Creepy, but aweseome.

Of course, now I'm going to be terrified of all the Bratz dolls I still have for when I babysit.

Very cool concept, that dolls may actually have thoughts. I like how it was written too. Excellently done.

I liked it but I'm confused. Kelly is Joy's doll, and Joy is Aubrey's doll?

~Miki

Great, great story. I'm kind of confused who Aubrey is? Is she Joy? Dolls are always creepy, especially when they're pretty.

Excellent title and interesting storyline. Reminds me of that doll Chucky...he was a bit cheeky too wasn't he? :)

A bit confused about the ending. This story is told in the viewpoint of Kelly, whose mother Joy is also a doll, and Aubrey is the real child? Yes I think so.

Very interesting, good work.

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First of all, the name just sucked me in XDD, I must say-creative!! ><
As for the content, it was amazingly creepy,
Which is a good thing! I LOVED it! XD, I love how you constructed each sentence to make the doll come to life, like she was a real person of some sort...
Obviously the ending was just as "delightful" and I can't wait for more stories like these! XDD

oh wow...creepy. i liked the last line.

Whoa...okay...what?
No idea WHAT this story is all about but...I like how it was written out.
My favorite line is: She wouldn't be so surprised if he even ** mommy right.
But wait...explain to me (I'm dumb) This doll is Joy's and Joy's Aubrey's doll?
I'm confused...

Just like everyone else, this story reminded me of Chucky, only less creepy. I've always loved dolls in a horror story (even if they scare me).

So, I was expecting that this will be like those stories where it's all scary and no introspection. Your characterization of the doll (Kelly Doll) seems more human compared to most stories, especially with the swearing and all. She seems so distant and cynical.

I thought this was really good. *faves* Great job!

-C.N (from the Roadhouse)

Oddly enough when I was a kid I used think my dolls could feel and think. So when I put them away most of the time I'd kiss and apologize for hurting them. I think I kept this up until I was eight or nine when I realized dolls couldn't feel. But I guess as a child the thought was comforting.

In truth, I'd hate to be a doll stuck with the ability to think and not be able to do anything besides that.

I believe years ago I had read a story where the doll could think and feel like humans. She was neglected and forgotten for years and thought this was her fate. Nice story, happy ending.

This one not so much, because it had an unhappy ending @;'

Poor doll, I'd have felt just like her and wanted to shank everyone, especially Aubrey.

Good story. Dolls are the perfect things for horror stories. They are creepy, their eyes seem to follow you around in a room.
~SirScott

Great story and delightfully creepy. Of course, one can't help but reminisce "Chucky" while reading this, yet, you made this character much more human.

-Pedro

Well, it's me again lol! :D Anyway, after reading this work, my first impression is "dude, that's Chucky!" XD Anyway, interesting short here. I'd never expected to see a work like that. The whole doll having self-will really spooked me out with the thoughts. Apart from that, nothing to say. Bye! :)