dang. that was kinda depressing. but good. very good :)

i liked the 'for we're all in your head' repitition. it kinda brought the whole thing together

good work :)

x lauren

Dear Author,

First,

Thank you for reviewing on my story first of all.

Second,

I really liked the repetition of the line

"for were all in your head." because it

ties the poem together. I liked the

topic of the poem, and it was really

interesting to read. I think you pulled

off the tone nicely.

Sincerely,

Devouring Daisies