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eamane tinuviel 2008-08-13 . chapter 1
what i really like about this poem is that it reaches out to a wide audience. i think everyone wishes they could do all these things - just be themselves, not worry about what others think, and to just be happy.
it's funny you called it a "fantasy life" because even though happiness and self-love and respect is something we all should aspire to have, it really is diffuclt to get those things. so indeed, it does warrant to be called a fantasy.
you wrote this poem exceptionally well, right to the point where even though it doesn't rhyme, it has great flow.
awesome job ^_^

*courtesy of The Roadhouse's BEER RUN!
(Beer #6)
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