Excellent!

Short. Powerful. Passionate. Compassionate. Emotional. I loved it.

Peace.

Wow...that is really sad! But the poem was really strong. I think you're a good writer because you made the reader feel the emotion that you wanted them to feel, sadness. It's a powerful poem!

Yes, Rachel's death was not in vain. Very good writing and keep up the good work!

Dessi

sad:( but well written