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Bleucrystale05 2009-10-03 . chapter 9
D: so i have to wait for this story to finish? D:

anyway, it was very cute.. XD i STILL LOVE old books though.. *-* and oh, i got to finish this atleast and didn't stay late in the morning! :D
Bleucrystale05 2009-10-03 . chapter 4
Oh my gosh! i write my stories on paper too! *high five! XD..

i know what you mean.. you already wrote it then you're just gonna type it again. the reason im starting to type my stories is cause im out of notebooks to write on..XD

i still like it so far by the way... :D
Bleucrystale05 2009-10-03 . chapter 3
Oh by the way, on chapter 2 i think.. it's supposed to be "Est-ce que tu es malade". you forgot the verb after the pronom(i forgot how you say it in english.. >_
Bleucrystale05 2009-10-03 . chapter 2
I love it.. =o it's gotten me interested although i WILL NOT read it again in one day! oh my gosh.. >_<

it's my time to wash the dishes and i still have homework and project to do which i was supposedly doing last night if not for "old books" XD

i also still have to practice the song im gonna sing tomorrow for the preliminary .. D: my mom signed me without asking my permission..
Super.Secret.Music.Mission. 2009-07-05 . chapter 9
I like Pat the Bunny's mom a lot! She's refreshing. :) I wish people were really like that in real life...but since they aren't, I'll just enjoy them in this totally wacked out but lovable story. Update soon!! :)
kellet 2009-07-04 . chapter 8
This chapter made me collapse in fangirl squeals. Is it unthinkable to want my very own Pat the Bunny? I loved Roslin's names for him: Bunnikins, le Lapin de mon coeur. But I'm pretty sure you misstyped 'coeur'. Thanks for updating.
LondonLi 2009-07-03 . chapter 9
Well, I love any and all of your work, so I'm looking forward to your novel, even though I'll miss this story. And I'm really looking forward to the updated version of Old Books. That's one of my very favorites, mostly because Polly and Anthony are some of the the best characters ever!
Queen Jay 2009-07-03 . chapter 9
No! Don't hiatus! Not at a point like this, with Roslin in uber denial! I'll give you bribes! Cookies? Gooseberry pie? The American Presidency? Anything you want!
crazykindawonderful 2009-06-14 . chapter 8
FINALLY! hehe yay!
The last thing Pat said was adorable :)
mileycyrus.wanna-be 2009-06-12 . chapter 8
"I wasn’t the prettiest girl at school, or the smartest, or the dumbest, I simply was." I think this would be the perfect intro sentence for a story! Aha sorry, that was my first thought. Had to share.

Hm... hoping Roslin realizes feelings for the Bunny soon.
Queen Jay 2009-06-12 . chapter 8
Aww adorable ending to this chapter. I love her dad so much too! That was awesome. It almost rivals my affection for the part in the prev chapter where she needed Patrick's pocket. XD
LondonLi 2009-06-11 . chapter 8
Thanks for the update, even if it is a little late. I'm looking forward to the rest, especially since these are fun characters and Patrick deserves to actually "get" Roslin. Hope you have fun and learn a lot in your writing camp!
Essevera 2009-06-11 . chapter 8
Well, I GUESS I'll give you a review. Ha only kidding :) I loved the chapter, but it was a bit dialogue-heavy. No worries. Keep the story goin' :)
CrossMyHeart 2009-06-11 . chapter 8
...,...,...AW!.!.!.! Adorable!
Queen Jay 2009-05-29 . chapter 7
How about you are only allowed to discontinue this story if you agree to immediately start on another one? Yes? Because I think I love you and I would die if there will never be more. DIE I said! This isn't the kind of thing I joke about!

Jay
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