 The.Wizard.Pen.Dragon 2008-08-23 . chapter 1I love all the truly original ideas that filled this story, but I fear that it may be a little ... slow and that for that reason I was expecting a big ending. But the ending that it has was rather given away by the title. I did really like all the imagery, and I wish I could've seen your teacher's face when they read this!
Write on!
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