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Reviews For: Isle of the Not Gerbils
FairyFeetMagic 2008-09-27 . chapter 1
It's amusing. I like to write random things like that for school too.
I imagine your teacher was surprised as he/she read your paper.
The.Wizard.Pen.Dragon 2008-08-23 . chapter 1
I love all the truly original ideas that filled this story, but I fear that it may be a little ... slow and that for that reason I was expecting a big ending. But the ending that it has was rather given away by the title. I did really like all the imagery, and I wish I could've seen your teacher's face when they read this!
Write on!
Pen.Dragon
fatbird33 2008-08-13 . chapter 1
i'd love to be your teacher and recieve that. quite funny. i loved the dictator's name
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