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sheeparelikesocool 2009-11-07 . chapter 7
please, where can i read the rest of this story?
Hwesna 2009-11-03 . chapter 7
please can you update i would like to read more please!
Qatariyah 2009-09-24 . chapter 7
Hello,

remember I contacted 2 months ago about your story jade bracelet and where to better read it from. You suggested , I just reached chapter 6 and the story stopped there...Will you continue with the story any time soon if ever?!
lastkissb8 2009-09-16 . chapter 7
Love the story! Could someone please send me "Tatiana Moores" new website? Please =]
la rafale 2009-08-10 . chapter 4
I am not so sure I liked this chapter because it made Penelope completely vulnerable in a very short period of time. As a teacher of self-defense she should know better than anyone that wine and strangers don't mix. Plus for some one who is so intensely private it seems unlikely that she would hike up a dress to mid-thigh. The only show stopping spelling error in this chapter is "Penny plucked a strawberry off the platter and EXPECTED it for bugs."
la rafale 2009-08-10 . chapter 3
Though the whole "time-travel for love" is not a novel idea, you have done really well to make the idea your own and make the characters themselves really unique. There are some minor grammatical mistakes and spelling errors but they don't hinder the reader too much, except for one instance. The line "It was decided to cook one of the already plucked chickens into a vegetable" definitely made me do a double take and snort in laughter. Keep up the writing and it will be my pleasure to continue to do the reading.
leemya 2009-07-28 . chapter 7
Great Story! Penny is a great character. Luc has a lot of patience.
I is not opening for me to read the rest of this story.
FireStarter45 2009-07-20 . chapter 1
i really like it! cant wait to finish it! good job!1!
coeur-d'ange 2009-07-19 . chapter 7
I am glad you have continued your stories! Good luck on your efforts to find an agent!!
always a reader, writer and fan,
coeur-d'ange
Iris101 2009-07-18 . chapter 7
So I went to the site that was on your page (Im guessing that its the one that says Homepage at the top)...but thats as far as I got before getting totally confused on how to get to this story
bakagirl123 2009-07-18 . chapter 7
i didnt see your website on your profile. could you send it to me in your reply. thanks! love your story.
vballgurl 2009-07-18 . chapter 7
what does this mean for the Jade Bracelet? Are you no longer going to be updating it on FP?
AlexisLovesYou 2009-07-18 . chapter 6
LOVED IT! It's so good to here from you on FP again. How's the publisher searching going? There is a website called authonomy that you might want to check out. I've heard that publishers sometimes look for authors and books to publish from this sight. It's kind of like FP, except people can rate and review books and there are author ratings, etc. My authonomy name is alexislovesyou. You should check it out. :)
Obsession Changes Things 2009-07-17 . chapter 6
Great update! Update soon!

~Obsession
chic rebel 2009-07-17 . chapter 6
amazing. :)
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