I absolutely loved this.
It was sad, but it really pulls you in...

This is the most beautiful, heart-wrenching, perfect story I have ever read. You're an amazing writer, and I urge you to continue writing, you've got tremendous talent.

Please, keep it up! Maybe give a noob writer like me some tips. Ahahaha. Good luck!

That was quite sad. . .

But you wrote it quite well. I really enjoyed reading it.

- Koki