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Jkgiggle 2009-03-12 . chapter 1
HERE HERE!
XO katie OX 2008-08-14 . chapter 1
I love your poem. It has so much emotion in it. Thanks for writing it.
green-knickers 2008-08-14 . chapter 1
THis is definately something a lot of people can relate to about parent pressure. >_< me too. My da wasn't too good in school so now he pressures me to be. He gets pissy when i don't dress proper.
I think my favorite line was "your perfect plans are all laid out but yet I don't fit in" (I think "and yet i don't fit in" might work better)
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