First of all, thank you for updating!

Second of all, I hope Gemma feels better soon... and I want to know what happened to Ben!

Oh no Ben!

I hope you update soon, but I totally understand the whole school thing. I'm in my first year at University and I NEVER have time for anything.

Poor Gemma.

I hope they're able to rescue the garden in time!

I really liked the prologue, but this chapter is what really sucked me in. You write very well, and I like the little rhymes or whatever (I can't make a proper rhyme for crap). I hope she can get out soon!

Heh, yeah, pirates. When done right, the use of pirates is great. I actually like to read stories with them (when done right). But yeah, it can be cheesy. XD

Well, I noticed punctuation errors here and there... Um...can't really think of anything else to say...

So until next time, I guess. Keep writing!

Aww, poor sea-sick Gemma. I would like to know how she found the garden in the first place, but...I guess we'll find out later?

I thought the raven was named Wren...you called him Cren, though. =\

Well, despite the little grammatical errors and such, I'm liking this story. Gemma is a bit phobic of Ben, but that's pretty understandable, considering she's been without human-interaction for so long. Plus she was only ten then, and if she lived in mountains before, then there probably wasn't a lot of humans...at least not many her age. (I think I'm getting off track with my deductions. XD)

Anyways, until next time. Toodles!

A sentence was split somewhere, the last word.

Ooh! She's out! But she has to find a cure...(assuming she and not he is the savior...but I think I'm right). It must be odd to finally find yourself free...especially after five years. O.o

Well, tis definitely getting juicy...more juicy anyways. ^-^

Oh-ers! Falling out of trees? That's not good! Though I suspect...

Anyway, the part when she threw down the apples but didn't want to climb down, said something about 'he is standing too close to the tree for me to comfortably.' To comfortably what?

I like the line about Nin being silly, lol. :p

Hmm, he seems to sleep an awful lot. XD

I don't get where the little bud that sprouted into a tree was.

There was a part where a sentence was split up--a new line began. It was right after an 'as', but I don't really remember the scene. I think it was when the tree was blooming--not sure, though.
A few sentences were interrogative and should've ended with a question mark, but they ended with a period.

Hmm...so now there's a new person stuck in the garden. Well, at least Gemma has some human company now...assuming both are human. O.o

Hmm...okay, getting more interesting. Rather short chapter, but it works, I guess.

So, the girl is 15? Okay.

Well, I'm still liking this--granted, there hasn't been much. But I like the style of writing you have. The story flows nicely. I'd just suggest you watch your punctuation--it's rather non-existant at times.

Nice start. I would suggest changing it to normal--non-italicized--font, though. Unless it's like a dream...but then it wouldn't really be a prologue... =\

Whatever, anyway, I liked the descriptions--they paint a good picture. I'm curious now, so good job with that, too. Only thing, there were a few grammatical errors, such as run-ons. But, meh.

This is sad, but stranglely intriguing.
Although, I would put more detail in to spice it up. I kind of drifted, to be honest, so i hope more description will be present next time.
Exceptionally good. Nice job so far.

Oh, first review! :)
Hm...intersting, i wonder what will happen to Gemma next!