I liked it:)

I agree with you...Amy and Sketchy Brent's story was MUCH more fun. While it was sweet of Kelsey and Tim, it wasn't as exciting. It was nice though, nonetheless. Great job! :)

kelsey is so adorable :)

nice!

aw how cute =)

I personally like this backstory. I normally don't like oneshot sequels (they tend to be reiterations or the same story again or something similar), but this was fine. Even though we already knew what happened, it was interesting to see their POVs and plus, they were kinda more fun. (: I'm very glad artistic dreamer added this to our c2. (:

Well, it wasnt as cute as Amy's and Sketchy Brent's story but I seem to like Kelsey more than Amy..so I really enjoyed it. Light, fun and it helps that Tim seems so incredibly hot (well, in words at least) =) Good job!

Loved it, just like I loved the first one.

"So this time, instead of shaking on it, I sealed the deal the way Tim had once told me most guys and girls sealed bets. And this time, I made the first move.

Tim may think he fully won the bet, but I never lost anything to begin with."

Aw... cute :)

But i think that something with a little bit more of their relationship would be nice, like, outside of them making bets :P

Anyway, great job!

Very cute sequel! Although I have a feeling they won't stop at one kiss!

this is so sweet =D As much as I love your one shots I think I like your actual stories better so when can we be expecting a new story? lol great job with this one shot though