|Reviews for Wilting|
| Lime-Cat 8/16/08 . chapter 1
You have an awesome summary for this poem - even though it's a quote from your poem, it tells the reader exactly what this poem is about and it piques the interest of your reader - very nicely done!
I love the imagery in this piece because I could clearly see the events described and the emotions behind them.
I also like the fact that you have proper capitalization and punctuation in this poem - the punctuation helps the reader (me) out with the flow (much easier on the eyes) and makes the entire poem look all nice and pretty.
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