You have an awesome summary for this poem - even though it's a quote from your poem, it tells the reader exactly what this poem is about and it piques the interest of your reader - very nicely done!

I love the imagery in this piece because I could clearly see the events described and the emotions behind them.

I also like the fact that you have proper capitalization and punctuation in this poem - the punctuation helps the reader (me) out with the flow (much easier on the eyes) and makes the entire poem look all nice and pretty.

Great job!

-silv3rdr34ms

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