wow, i really love this poem, its relateable, thought provoking and makes a really good read, i'd be very proud of this if it were my work, well done :) xx

Love always hurts someone... How true. I can't really relate to this, but, I agree that love hurts.

ouch lol. I do always love when people so plainly state the truth of love as a thing destined to cause pain. Definitely getting a fav here. I do not mean to pry, but (do you happen to have six fingers on your right hand? LOL no sorry) if there is one thing I have learned, it is forgiveness. Truthfully I would fall into the category of 'the one who loves me'. She chose someone else, and yes I did hurt more than I thought possible, but in the end I remembered that I still loved her and I know she deserves happiness. So... I dont really know what there is to take from that but this: it is ok to love and be loved. The spirit will always endure, whatever your choice.

And the sad thing is, it's completely true.

This was really well done. :)

- Koki