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tainted.words 2009-07-24 . chapter 5
this is a bit late, but congrats on the nominations! :)
i cant wait to see what happens next in the story. what's going on between leila and mike, are they going out? or just friends? im a little confused :S
iEmo 2008-12-25 . chapter 5
Hi! I know, I'm being kind of lazy not signing in but I had to say this:

Leah needs to dump Neil. I just don't like him. I hope she finds some sort of confidence so she can do said thing.

Peace. Love. Emoness.
WriterGurl123 2008-12-25 . chapter 5
Leila doesn't realize that even though she's hurt Leah numerous amounts of time, Leah it seems, will eventually forgive her. I just don't know how you can throw away years of friendship; go one day to being best friends and the next completely ignoring her, or making fun of her.
I know Leila's got issues, but WTF! Leah needs to be strong enough to voice her opinion to Leila and tell her that she's being a complete bitch, when in fact Leah has done absolutely nothing to her. Leah works hard to get good grades, but with everything else she lacks self-confidence while Leila has amazing confidence (or at least that's how she makes it seem).
OK! Now I'm done with my rant, love the story!
hegberg 2008-10-22 . chapter 4
Oh I can't wait for the next chapter... this is very interesting
Gracie-San 2008-10-05 . chapter 4
This was a good chapter. I liked it. Update soon please!
BeautyisFleeting 2008-09-09 . chapter 3
Another great chapter!! I can't wait to see what happens between Leah and Neil now!!
Gracie-San 2008-09-07 . chapter 3
Whoa! I like it! It's really good and interesting, I can't wait to read more!

If you want check out some of my other stories!

Peace. Love.
WriterGurl123 2008-09-06 . chapter 3
I wish she would just dump Neil already, it's like he's a possessive, ass-hole.

Love it!
BeautyisFleeting 2008-08-30 . chapter 2
I really liked this chapter. Leila is my favorite character so far. But there's still alot to find out about her, so I can't wait until you update :D
Keep up the great work!!
WriterGurl123 2008-08-30 . chapter 2
It's a bit sad that Garret think that he can't get Leah...sure he likes to smoke cigarettes and pot, but he seems like a sweetie, while Neil seems a bit...boring.

Love it!
WriterGurl123 2008-08-26 . chapter 1
It seems like a really good story; there aren't many like it, so it definitely does catch someone's attention. Is this the prologue? Because it if it is, then Leah is probably smoking with the guys a lot or hooking up with Garret behind her boyfriend's back.

I like it, so please continue!
tonight we bloom 2008-08-15 . chapter 1
i lovee it so far!
you are amazing!
BeautyisFleeting 2008-08-15 . chapter 1
First chapter and I'm already wanting a Leah x Garrett!!
lol :D
Another great story!! There were a few grammer mistakes, but everybody makes typos, so it doesn't take away from the story at all :D

I love the difference in Leah and Leila's POVs. You really make them relateable and uniquely distinct!!
Great job and update soon! :D
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