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MistyRose14 2009-09-25 . chapter 10
yeah...i like drama. but i like mellow too (and marshmallows...and sugar, in general) ^^. i like the depth that this chapter brings, in contrast with the previous one that really held a great deal of reaction and pure emotions. all-around, this keeps getting better and better! oh, and...sorry for the late review XD. life's been crazy, and it took getting sick to finally get around to things. donc, continue s.v.p :)!
MistyRose14 2009-09-25 . chapter 9
well that IS a good idea - 'cause i didn't want the fun to end so soon! seriously, i was just so excited to take in all of the emotions in this chapter. it was definitely one of your most powerful updates yet, and i'm looking forward to more :D. but we'll see what the next chapter's got in store for us...très bien fait, comme toujours!
Niki Tori 2009-09-23 . chapter 10
Forgive me for not reviewing sooner. Thanks for the dedication! This was a nice chapter, very humorous! I really do like this story and hope to read more in the near future! Good job Miss Kaiyako! ^_^


Much love and Many Hugs

Niki
Misao S 2009-09-21 . chapter 5
This story is FUNNY! It has me laughing out loud. You have an upbeat style. Nice how you manage to create tension between the characters without much description. Ah, the classic love-hate relationship.
Lunaira 2009-09-07 . chapter 10
That was so cool! *_* So who does Shigure like, anyways? o-o I'll wait patiently for your next update~
Se No NEWS 2009-09-05 . chapter 10
This is really quite a read~ I enjoyed it a lot :) keep writing~
shuu.sky 2009-09-05 . chapter 10
I loved this chapter so much! Shigure was so cool; I've never seen him so agressive but what I like is that you still kept that fun side of him, too. I wonder who this new model girl is, she sounds like she's up to no good!

and lmao, they've been out since 4:30? My parents would have my head if that ever happened, lolol.

Patiently waiting for the next chapter :D
XxSiennaxX 2009-09-03 . chapter 10
Loved the chapter. Her parents would be so worried about her by now. I can't wait to find out who she'll end up with. I'm starting to get the impression that she likes Shigure more than Masaharu.
Please update again soon :)
Deathscythe Outlaw 2009-09-03 . chapter 10
I was so excited to see that you've posted a new chapter. Once again, you've written a good chapter. I'm liking the direction where you're taking this story. It's good to see that this chapter was not full of drama like the previous chapters. Don't want to see Tsuki down. At least, she can be at some peace for a while.

I'm also liking the new character. It does seem she is in love with Shigure. If that is the case, then it would be good to see Tsuki have a rival for Shigure's affection. That is if Tsuki still has feelings for Shigure.

Good chapter and I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Deathscythe Outlaw

~Keep writing!

PS
I see the redhead doesn't have a name since it wasn't mention. Hope to know her name. But from what I read it sounds like she's foreign. If that's the case, then she would make a nice addition to the story. Hopefully, they can get along at the end.
XxSiennaxX 2009-09-01 . chapter 9
I love your story so far. I can't wait to find out why her brother is covering up for his mother.
Please update soon :)
Niki Tori 2009-08-27 . chapter 9
*Lets out a sigh*

I love the ending! Hope that you start with the new story soon!! That would make me the happiest kid on the planet. lol. I want to find out more.

~I feel ashamed because I thought that Shigure was hooking it up with her mom. lol. Luckily he wasn't. Oh also I love that he is a Mafia lord! That is so H-O-T! Apologies for the fan girl review. But at this point I absolutely love Gravity.

Keep up the good work, Kagami.


~Much Love and Many Hugs~

Niki
Niki Tori 2009-08-27 . chapter 8
Oh no! If her mom is with who I think she is with I will flip in a casket right here and now.

*Leans closer to the laptop*

I think I might cry @.@

Moving onto the next chapter!

~much love and many hugs~

Niki!
Niki Tori 2009-08-27 . chapter 7
wow very interesting. I am on the edge of my seat right now! Lol. Moving on to the next chapter!


~Much love and many hugs~

Niki!
shuu.sky 2009-08-23 . chapter 9
Ah, I was literally like "YES" when this chapter came out xD. My sister looked at me like I was insane...

I thought Tsukino's brother was so cool at the beginning of the chapter. He was so suave, even when he just discovered his mom was cheating. Ah, love those types!

I also really liked how much you conveyed Tsukino's emotions. Her dialogue to her parents when she gets home is really powerful in my opinion. And I was so surprised about Shigure; it's such a cool idea that you're making him a mafia guy ;D Ahh, bad boys are awesome too!

waiting for the next chapter!
Lunaira 2009-08-23 . chapter 9
LOL SHIGURE?!? =O I'm definitely surprised now. =c That was kinda random, though, at the end. XD; I'd read a continuation of this story, as long as you're the one who writes it. c= I'll wait patiently for your next update~
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