Very good, dear. I'm anxiously awaiting more of it! I'd say more, but I'm brain dead right now.

Psst, you know me. .>

I love you, sis!

wow, just wow. You know, I really wish I could write like you. This is one of the best stories I have read so far. I can't wait until you update. One thing though, it is somewhat difficult to tell who is doing what at some points in the chapter, although if you reread it you can easily see. It makes reading it more of a challenge to me but...
Anyway, I like this story a lot and it will be going on my favorites.