so few words, but so much meaning... fantastic job!

Mm... It certainly makes sense. I love how you compared a man without God to a flower without roots. Because it's such a good comparison, really.

You're right, it was very short.

But it had so much emotion!

I don't have any criticisms.

Luna Turner

Simple but nice. Good job, you have more talent than you know. :D

Wow...this is a very short poem but, yet, so powerful. I loved the last part when you'd said ''A man without God, will surely die'' I don't know why, but I do. Keep up the good work.

Wow.. this was truly a surprise - a good one :D

Loved it, and it's so true too!

fleur

so simple

so straight forward

so pretty.

WAY TO LOVE GOD! (me 2)

-sv

Very good. Very true. Very short. I like it

God Bless You

Holli x